掲示板 Forums - Does anyone enjoy poetry?

Reading some is probably a good start. I like modern authors, for example 中原中也. If you end up checking them out, I'd recommend looking for 朗読 (with JP subtitles/text) instead of trying to read them yourself (at least for now). Like this for example: https://aozoraroudoku.jp/voice...

I also like watching lessons aimed at (native) students (middle/high school), but you need pretty good Japanese for those. The AI dub is a crime against humanity...

I've never really tried writing tanka. Having more "space" seems nice. I can try one right now, don't judge my sh***y writing too much

夢む月

夜に目覚める

鬼人の血

一輪の花

赤く染めゆく

鬼人 (きじん) | 夢む (ゆめむ)

@『!!☆˙⋆✮「 ジョースター」˙⋆✮☆!!』A mora is a unit of sound: single kana like あ、い、う、ん are all 1 mora. Pairs like きょ、みょ、しょ count as 1 mora. ー counts as 1 mora. small っ also counts as 1.
きょう = 2, がっこう = 4, etc.

You're welcome :)

Just to clarify, 中原中也 is "modern" in the early 昭和 sense, not current day modern. At the time 七五調 was still very popular, later shifting more towards 自由詩.

So if you look at a few lines: 今日も小雪の (7) 降りかかる (5) | いたいたしくも (7) 怖気づき (5) | 汚れつちまつた (8) 悲しみに (5) ← this line being 8-5 for emphasis.

By the way, you're meant to read it 汚れっちまった, because small っ wasn't common back then. I think it was just getting introduced, but don't quote me on that.

Hopefully that wasn't too boring :D

Beautiful

I have a little poem fragment I've been mulling over but it's not quite where I want it

We'd reunite when the time is right--

That's what He told me, yes I know,

But I can't help but doubt sometimes,

It only seems he's let me go...

In a way, yeah! Each "he" represents a different person. The first is God, and the second is a friend I used to know

DAMN ur poem punches me with quiet heartbreak. It's painfully beautiful and unflinching.

I havent been able to do any poetry writing due to external reasons, but I recently wrote some stuff down so im sharing it

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What I want to do right now
Is to close my eyes and
Think happy thoughts

The cold water nothing to be
Finding itself here and there
Only to go back into the sea

Floating on the surface of my mind
Too scared to just close my eyes
Listen to the beat of my heart
Muffle it and just go to sleep

I'll take that as a yes XD

I'm probably going to expand on these eventually, I'm just not sure where to go with them yet They're separate poems by the way :3

"Not a lover or a friend, just a stranger on a tether;

Blessed to see you in my dreams, cursed to know you've left forever."

"I want a love--a love that speaks

Not in the words of common youth,

But through the touch, the smile, the gaze,

The passion of unspoken truth."

I like how these verses capture both loss and longing with simple but powerful imagery.
Together dey' create a touching contrast between the sorrow of what has been lost and the hope for a deep and genuine connection built on an unknown understanding.