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Hi there! I love reading and writing poetry, and I was wondering if anyone else here does too 
poems are a great way for me to write about emotions that I don't know how to express otherwise. If anyone would like to see some of my poems, I'm happy to share 
I would love to hear your poems
I haven’t written a poem in a while, but I’m sure I could find an old one if I looked if u want
YOoooOo! I love poetry because I can't understand it..Lol Jk..ofc I love poems
My friend ( girl ) used to show me poems that she wrote and apparently on some closer inspection, I would find out that that the poems she wrote about was about me....(every time)
I would def. and love to like to see your poems, no cap!!
I would love to see your poems too! I am horrible at writing poems, but my favorite to write (and fail at) are Haiku and freestyle. I could share some, tho. What are your favorite poems to write? 
Yay, I'll share some of my poems with y'all 
most of the ones I write aren't happy poems though I did write one about God though and I like it a lot so I'll share that one too 
feel free to share if you're comfortable with it!! 
I'm also currently working on a poem, so I'll share that one when I've worked out the kinks
Oh So
Sadness will tug at your heart, oh so strong,
Missing a soul, oh so far, for so long,
Holding their hand was so easy back then;
Now it's so hard just to hear from them.
Bitterness holds on so long, oh so tight,
Bitter toward things oh so hard to fight.
Wanting to show them what they used to see,
Like they forgot how it used to be...
Did you forget? Just tell me, oh please,
Knowing you did made me weak in the knees,
How could a friend, oh so close, fall so far?
Oh, I would love to just know where you are.
What It Means
If I could see you I'd have such a thrill
Feeling those memories gave me such wealth
If I could know that you thought of me still
Knowing you did I would comfort myself.
If I had a choice I would not let you go
Knowing you might not be close to me then
Words cannot measure how I miss you so
Or what it'd mean just to see you again.
God's Word
Looking around in his attic one day
A man found some pages of old
They stated a truth in a new kind of way
That to him had never been told.
A prophesied man came down to this world
To save us from sin and from shame
He gave us great miracles, stories, and truth
And healed both the sick and the lame.
This man was named Jesus, the God and the Savior
Of men who fell far from the Lord
He came to cleanse souls of their sinful behavior
And teach them the ways of His Word.
With tears in his eyes, the man set down the Book
And dropped to his knees in a prayer
A prayer that he may find forgiveness in God
And soon come to live with Him there.
Here they are I have more, but these are the best 
Aww thank you so much!! Poems are a wonderful form of expression
those are so goodI finished that poem I was talking about it's... about my old best friend 
more poems possibly on the way as well, I just collected some of my unfinished ones and I might be working on them soon
You always had my heart, you knew it well
I thought we loved each other--only time would tell.
You faded slowly, and why I didn't know,
Time would tell if you'd become a shadow.
I didn't notice first when you moved on,
You stayed with me, although your heart was gone;
If I'd known the truth, maybe I wouldn't cry
Because I'd have a chance to say goodbye.
I love you terribly, although you hurt me so,
We both know that I'm horrible at letting go
I wonder why that didn't change your mind
A friend like me is very hard to find.
Although you stabbed me, and I felt the pain
My starving heart would let you stab again...
My loyalty is my weakness, it's true;
I'll always pay the price for loving you.
Wow, it sounds dramatic doesn't it
These poems are beautiful and heartfelt ... thank you for sharing them. Seriously, there's something so raw and sincere in your writing that really hits. Each piece carries a deep emotional weight, and it's clear that you put your heart n soul into them. 
What it means :
This one feels like a quiet whisper of love and yearning, not necessarily romantic, but deep and profound. It’s restrained in a really poignant way, like you’re trying to stay composed while feeling everything at once. ( my fav is tis one )
Oh my gosh, thank you so much you are absolutely spot-on about What It Means (it's my favorite too ), I wrote it (and most of the other ones) about a very close friend who drifted away from me, and he's the reason for many of my poems 
You noticed so many details that I didn't expect anyone to notice Seeji thank you so much for your kind words 
Im so sorry for what happened between you and ur friend, and what is heartwarming is that you still choose to hang on ur friend, even when ur friend chose to drift apart from you ! THat's what friends are for...I like to see everything in detail so much!! Im ur friend that Is drifting closer...
One of my best traits is my loyalty to the people I love, even when they have moved on I keep them in my heart and my prayers
THE SAME is with me too...but none of MY FRIENDS ARE THAT WAY ( except familys)...I always do the best and my friends best are the least..why is the world like this..
When a person is loved, that person must also bear the risk of being hated 
But there's still one Being we can always trust: God
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