掲示板 Forums - Does anyone enjoy poetry?

Btw here are some more verses I made in a little more depth about wanting someone I cared about who ditched me to watch me die. (Freestyle poem section cuz I get the most freedom in this style)

I'd burn myself,

And you'd be last,

To watch me die

and watch my eyes

You and I were not the same,

So I'll choose to lose my faith,

And lose my life

Lose myself

To all extent

Then your eyes will start to fade

(sorry I had to stop writing cuz I have to go to bed byyyy guys)

gn